This had me hooked in the first sentence! I loved how descriptive you were so I could really picture the characters. Can’t wait to read the second part. You’ve got a new fan
this was such a rich, whimsical treat. Lines like “He always comes for the bell” and “Do I think Eldric will be done making your magical hat…?” gave me chuckles and chills. The dialogue carries the whole weight like it's been stitched with silk and spell-dust. Magical stuff, Molly.
This had me hooked in the first sentence! I loved how descriptive you were so I could really picture the characters. Can’t wait to read the second part. You’ve got a new fan
Thanks so much!
Fun dialogue that sets a good start for the story. Enjoyed it.
Holy cow. I loved the imagery and the dialogue! I love these characters. I got so excited reading this since there's a part 2!
This is so kind, thank you!
I just loved this. What a good story to read in bed :) and the dialog, you are witty lol. This is a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing.
this was such a rich, whimsical treat. Lines like “He always comes for the bell” and “Do I think Eldric will be done making your magical hat…?” gave me chuckles and chills. The dialogue carries the whole weight like it's been stitched with silk and spell-dust. Magical stuff, Molly.
Thanks so much, this is so kind! I'm happy you enjoyed!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed 😊